Tim L.

Hm. First off, I do proofread, and this is the fourth time I have re-written and re-worked this poem; my average count is seven. Aged the way I have used ...

Also, after people told you to consider their criticisms, you replied by saying you are proud of your poem's "success"... You are on a website that is meant for new ...

pettybage, Thank you for the review. You did make a lot of good points, especially dropping the almost before stables...English is, after all, a Germanic language, a language of force. ...

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Esther, Thank you for the review! I know the main character is not the most likeable guy at this point, but the anti-hero complex has always been my favorite, and ...

The title is a reference to Megan's Law, which is a law requiring sex offenders to register for their crimes, have signs put in front of their houses saying what ...

Yeah dude for real, I totally, and completely forgot to add that this is just part of it. Hahaha I must seem like a really bad writer now, yeah this ...

yeah by the way I know the format is probably really, really annoying but that's the way it was pasted and I was WAY too lazy to go back and ...

I'm going to put the entire, nuclear apocalypse idea to bed for a while. I'll continue when I'm done with what I want to take on next...

WaterVypor, Thanks for the review. You gave me some good advice, in fact I wrote this poem quite a long time ago and I didn't even realize the "still stand ...